Yeah. This is really tightening my prose up. It's been interesting to compare my mentors' focus on my prose with other people who have been having major changes in structure thrown at them by their mentors. There's at least one person rewriting their entire novel from 1st to 3rd person or vice versa, and there's no way I could have done that in the time available (though the YA books are about half the length of mine).
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Date: 2015-10-04 07:49 pm (UTC)