Oct. 25th, 2017

davidgillon: A pair of crutches, hanging from coat hooks, reflected in a mirror (Default)

"Please find the enclosed cheque"

I can't believe you're sending me a cheque rather than doing an electronic funds transfer.

Pages through all four sheets of paper.

Examines envelope.

Rifles through sheets of paper,

Shakes envelope upside down.

*Headdesk*

A certain company's customer helpdesk is getting a bollocking in the morning!

On the writing front, I've started in on Yoon's markups of 'Graveyard Shift', but Word has crashed several times so I haven't gotten far as yet. If it does it again I'm going to conclude the document is damaged and work from another copy, which is going to be a pain for copying markups over. Plus I'm still noodling the revised background to the viillain, which is a chapter 1 reveal, so really not something I can easily ignore. Checking my Excel timeline I've confirmed I have essentially 5 segments in Bobby's PoV. Three need changing to Aleks, one I may drop entirely or leave as is, it depends on how I'm handling the other characters in that scene - it's the climactic action sequence and done as rapidly shifting PoV. The epilogue I'll see how I feel when I get to it (and what Yoon's markups say), I could leave it, switch it to Aleks, or move it to Laura's.
 

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